Madam, While reading your story I got a feeling that your narration is poetic and now after completing the story, its sounds your character also is poetic. YOur concept - why worry about the storm, try to enjoy the rain by dancing, is good. It may not be possible to follow this all the time, but having such attitude is positive. Life is a challenge to be happy even under difficult cirumstances.
Re: was everything
by Anisha Lala on Mar 16, 2013 10:59 PM
since the reference is of a certain time period in past hence the tense....AND ..more importantly... when dreams become reality ....they dont remain dreams anymore !!! and as you can well vouch, my dream had come true !!!
Re: Maybe I am wrong
by Anisha Lala on Mar 16, 2013 11:04 PM
hey man !! we arent alluding to old stone age...man i m not so ancient...by any stretch of imagination :))) contact lenses had already been invented and marketed :))) and guess what ...even color tv with commericial breaks but minus saas bahu serials had meandered into our world!! :)
Re: Re: Maybe I am wrong
by rahul deva on Mar 19, 2013 10:03 AM
Anisha,Do you know anything about pre-liberalisation India?And colour TV was also introduced in 1982 not 1980.
While reading your story, went through the thrill of reading about 2 good people having a great married life and had my eyes fill with tears on reading about the sudden separation.
May Jehovah god bless you with the strength to carry on.
