Presume that Vaihayasi Pande Daniel may have read "Books, Crooks, and Counselors: How to write accurately about Criminal Law and Courtroom Procedure". In that book, examples from actual cases are provided along with excerpts of authentic courtroom dialogue which increases reader delight. Who really snuffed out Sheena's breath?
Re: Re: Re: Excellent reporting
by Lokesh C on Oct 14, 2017 02:27 AM
Lay your seedy judgements, who says they're part of our lives? You own the money, you control the witness I hear you're lonely, don't monkey with my business You pay the profits to justify the reasons I heard your promise but I don't believe it That's why I'll do it again
Excellent narration but longish. What you could do is to split the content with pictures(drawings) of actual proceedings that would eliminate the feeling of verbosity!
Re: Trial proceedings - Suggestion
by Anand on Sep 28, 2017 03:03 PM
Actually, I quite enjoy her writing, in spite of excessive use of the comma, and her calling 'muddemaal' as maddamal! She can tell a story well, and has facility with words. How many Indians can claim today to write even grammatically correct English, leave apart good English? Still, your suggestions are good.
Re: Re: Trial proceedings - Suggestion
by vaihayasi daniel on Sep 29, 2017 05:22 PM
Thanks Anand for your regular advice. Rectified that wrong spelling :) Now about the commas... Hmmm... Will keep that in mind
Re: Trial proceedings - Suggestion
by vaihayasi daniel on Sep 29, 2017 05:15 PM
Thanks for the suggestion and for your feedback, Aravind. Will certainly keep what you said about the images in mind for the next update.
