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poem 11 in entirety
by Raj Thackersey on Aug 05, 2010 11:21 PM | Hide replies
the poem is not as good as others
karan met kaur near a store
the baby thought karan was a big bore
she gave her mom all the lease
and decided to sleep in peace
in the pic you see karan's t_u_m_m_y
and m_u_m_m_y chewing a g_u_m_m_y
london looks good
my advice to karan eat less food
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Re: poem 11 in entirety
by Sajul P on Aug 07, 2010 12:37 AM
Last 2 lines too good
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Re: poem 11 in entirety
by pankaj Tiwari on Aug 08, 2010 08:39 PM
NIce poem :)
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Re: poem 11 in entirety
by deepak oruganti on Aug 06, 2010 02:50 AM
Good one :-)
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Re: Re: poem 11 in entirety
by Raj Thackersey on Aug 09, 2010 12:55 PM
thanks pals
had lots of time on the weekend but no new spotting
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