If you know the "Readability" tool of Microsoft word, then please check your review before finalising it. For general Article like this the readability should be 60-70%. Your article scores 52%. I think this is quite low, so improve this. For GODs sake doesn’t intimidate your readers. You are writing this for your reader, not to show your English skill. For your information, the paragraph I have written above has a 64% readability. Try to attend some writting skill workshop. Take this as a positive feedback.
"The best joke in Hot Tub Time Machine -- one of those films that wears its concept proudly on its title, as if the idea itself is far-out enough to eliminate the need for a name, like Snakes On A Plane -- comes from its very name. "...this is his first line....does his computer have a full stop key? what a duck is he...kwaik kwaik......
Raja sen, learn to use punctuation marks. A sentence, which is as long as a paragraph kills the reader.Also I suspect that you write for yourself and not for the audience.
