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10 sentences and what's wrong with each of them!


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giveanid
indianisms
by giveanid on Jan 12, 2015 10:35 AM

1. Roaming around. (i'm just roaming around)
2. kind attention, kindly request (letters)
3. like anything (laughed like anything)
4. n number of (n number of people)
5. or what? (you coming or what?)
6. tight slap
7. two wheeler
8. As per (As per your letter..)
9. Even (Even I couldn't understand)
10. royally (I blasted him royally)

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giveanid
The article didn't live upto expectations
by giveanid on Jan 12, 2015 10:19 AM  | Hide replies

10. It is prohibited to use the elevator in case of fire.

Who is the 'it' that is being prohibited from not using the elevator in case of a fire?

The "it" is not 'who', it is the 'act' of using. The instruction could be made even simpler than suggested
Do not use elevator in the event of a fire.
It is curt and to the point.

(I prefer event to case)

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giveanid
Re: The article didn't live upto expectations
by giveanid on Jan 12, 2015 10:23 AM
I think the author picked the theme, correctly, and then got carried away by it

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Shobhit Acharya
A lesson for the professor
by Shobhit Acharya on Jan 11, 2015 08:01 AM

"And it bothered us to no end!" --- wrong

Stop censoring posts because they make you look bad. Man up.

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PRASAD HSR
one night stand?
by PRASAD HSR on Jan 10, 2015 04:29 AM

servicing other passengers

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prabhanjan tattar
Problem with grammarians
by prabhanjan tattar on Jan 08, 2015 05:35 PM  | Hide replies

Over improvising leads to destruction and deterioration! What is this one?

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8. Do not keep the doors open for longer than necessary. It delays the lift from servicing other passengers.

Though not incorrect, this particular instruction could also be made simpler.

Thus: Do not keep the doors open for longer than necessary; it causes inconvenience to others.
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If its not broken, don't fix it.

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giveanid
Re: Problem with grammarians
by giveanid on Jan 12, 2015 10:20 AM
Do not keep the doors open for longer than necessary

is enough. Why explain the relationship causality and all to everyone. A long essay makes people look away

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prabhanjan tattar
Common mistakes my foot!
by prabhanjan tattar on Jan 08, 2015 05:31 PM  | Hide replies

What is this nonsense of a sentence "The (several) spelling and grammatical errors aside, these sentence are way too complicated." It should have been written as "The (several) spelling and grammatical errors aside, these sentences are way too complicated."

Moral: When correcting, don't make a mistake.

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Kumbakonam Venkataraman
Re: Common mistakes my foot!
by Kumbakonam Venkataraman on Jan 09, 2015 12:40 PM
Why 'way too complicated' as though being complicated is okay up to certain extent? We may simply say, ... these sentences are complicated.

Moral: While you point out a mistake, don't commit one.

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Pat Thakur
Re: Re: Common mistakes my foot!
by Pat Thakur on Jan 09, 2015 10:00 PM
If I want to the commit mistake, I will the commit. Why should I listen to the anybody?

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Bhaskar Majumdar
English usage in India
by Bhaskar Majumdar on Jan 08, 2015 03:28 PM

The usage of correct English is deteriorating fast. Incorrect English is conveniently passed off as Indian English. Advertisement firms, especially those advertising in English on TV are prime culprits in spreading bad English. Even when they say do so rupiah in correct Hindi, they will advertise Rupees 200 in incorrect English rather than 200 rupees or 200 dollars etc. This is also the trouble of learning English in school from teachers who don't know proper spoken or written English usage.

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