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Excerpt: 'Love is when I can't pay attention in class'


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nehal rupani
Crap Hindi Masala
by nehal rupani on Oct 02, 2011 09:10 PM

Rediff Grow up,

This doesn't seems like new generation story. It's boring one and looks like copied and edited from any bollywood movies.

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Godrocksbig
Inferior
by Godrocksbig on Sep 27, 2011 05:01 AM

Inferior Writing, not in the class of a Writer who has potential. But seems to be full of ideas and fertile imagination. Suggest the Author to buy software like New Novelist or Dramatica by spending about $200 and hone his skills.

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h r
Not the best writing but...
by h r on Sep 27, 2011 12:49 AM

The flow is good and it might interest young readers!

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ashish jain
i liked it
by ashish jain on Sep 27, 2011 12:47 AM

a good read.

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Visharad Software
Very immature writing
by Visharad Software on Sep 27, 2011 12:40 AM  | Hide replies

It looks like he has simply written some incidents one after another. The writing is very immaturish.


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Visharad Software
Re: Very immature writing
by Visharad Software on Sep 27, 2011 01:38 AM
Just to clarify, I wrote 'immaturish' instead of 'amateurish' because I wanted to make the pun.


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shilpa mehra
shame on penguin
by shilpa mehra on Sep 26, 2011 09:16 PM

what is penguin up to? trying to make money out of a mass market what shame and then we have rediff putting up - paid publicity right what a shame

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destiny
gross.... it is shit
by destiny on Sep 26, 2011 08:24 PM

mr. singh ... find another job.... no one will buy your book....

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doverdemon
yuckkkkkkkkkkkk
by doverdemon on Sep 26, 2011 04:57 PM

what sort of amateur junk is rediff making us read...i dunno whether to laugh or cry at this chanchal singh? did you pay penguin to get your book published...maybe your book could sell in interior haryana/bihar/UP where they are just starting to read englees...what an utter waste of time...my advice to you is stop writing and stop wasting your father's money!!

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