The event is embedded in every cricket lovers heart and soul in India. But the write up is too sketchy and filled with jargons that makes the total write up quite boring rather fills up with disgust. The author needs to go back to his basic course of masscomm if wishes to excel in his professional career !!!!
The event is embedded in every cricket lovers heart and soul in India. But the write up is too sketchy and filled with jargons that makes the total write up quite boring rather fills up with disgust. The author needs to go back to his basic course of masscomm if wishes to excel in his professional career !!!!
I understand the sentiment and even share it, but this piece is too verbose and too tedious, as if the writer is determined to use all the words he learnt at school. I had to skip midway and scroll down to the end. This piece could have been edited well and reduced the word count by atleast 50%